Winter Learning Journey - Activity
For this winter learning journey activity I went on a walk with Curious Kiwi through a forest. While walking I noticed that Curious Kiwi is nowhere to be found. Now I have to write 8-10 sentences on what while happen next.
I look around and Curious Kiwi is nowhere to be found. My heart starts to race my hands start shake. I feel the wind glide against my back. "Curious Kiwi, Curious Kiwi" I cried. I look in every direction with my back against the tree. Then suddenly I hear bush rattle. It sent chills up my spin. Then I felt a soft tap on my shoulder. I turned as quickly as possible to see..... Curious Kiwi! I took a big breath of relief.
Hi Tiava,
ReplyDeleteI was very intrigued by the short story you have written. I like how you have added different types of punctuation in your story.
- Zahra
Hi Tiava
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the image you added in. It makes your story that little bit more scarier. Keep up the amazing work.
Daniel
Hi Tiava. Your story paints a story in my head. Remember to double check your work before posting it. Anyways keep up the great work, you have been doing.
ReplyDeleteHello Tiava, I like how you have used some powerful words to make your short story sound really interesting to read. Keep up the fantastic work.
ReplyDeleteHi Tiava
ReplyDeleteNice story! I like how you added the image, It really makes it easier to imagine your story. Were there monsters in the woods?
Great story
Hey Tiava,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really creative story, full of great adjectives and verbs, well done! I love that yo have added a spooky picture to illustrate your writing too!
Nicky :)