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Sunday, 9 July 2017

Winter Learning Journey - Activity 11

Winter Learning Journey - Activity 11

For this winter learning journey activity I had to go on a waka and travel to New Zealand for the first time. I had to write poem on how I would feel.
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Poem
My heart beats fast
Heads turn
Everybody staring at me
I jump off the waka
I'm surrounded by all these people
The different patterns on their faces

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5 comments:

  1. Unknown12 July 2017 at 10:58

    Hi Tiava!

    This is such a beautiful poem - very creative and thoughtful! I love that you have used small simple sentences in your lines, that is so effective! The pictures also helps illustrate your poem and what it might have been like at that time.

    Well done Tiava!!

    Nicky :)

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  2. daniel12 July 2017 at 12:11

    Hi Tiava
    Great poem about landing on New Zealand for the first time! I would be nervous if I landed on a strange island that no one heard about. Keep up the good work.
    Daniel

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  3. Ohhsen15 July 2017 at 18:19

    Hi Tiava. If I had never been to New Zealand I would be very scared. I really like your poem, you have explained how you would feel, very well. Keep up the great work.

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  4. aminiasi17 July 2017 at 10:42

    Hello Tiava, if I have never been to New Zealand before and I was the first person to get off the waka I would be feeling excited but also nervous. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see more blog posts.

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  5. Alex18 July 2017 at 15:31

    Hi Tiava
    Nice poem! I like how you said that your heart was beating fast. Do you think other people would feel the same as you?
    Great work

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