Tuesday, 13 March 2018

Character Description

Robert was a wealthy man. He was also a very obnoxious neighbor.
He believed that magic existed, so he was slaving away in his garage
all day. Everyone thought he was a crazy man with a crazy fortune
in the bank. It was rare that you’d not see him with the same
clothes on. Robert lived alone, so he tried to prove that magic exists
to all of his neighbors. No one believed him.

Until one day he was out in the middle of his massive backyard.
Chairs surrounded him, it was strange.
Suddenly they started to levitate.
Everyone stood outside their houses in shock.
“I finally did it” he screamed.

Today for writing my group were doing character descriptions. We read some of the examples to help us. We were given a photo to base our writing about. In my writing I used simple, compound and complex sentences to make it more interesting.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Tiava, my name is Tia, I absolutely love your character description, I really like how you gave a great descriptive of who he is and what was happening. You are a great writer, keep up the great work!